A Zen gay atheistic Texan’s perspective

Oh my God!!! Wow! I’ve just finished my longest story to date. It is a 69 page novella sci-fi thriller. And, I think, it’s actually pretty decent. Right now it needs a HUGE amount of editing. So, don’t feel obligated to read it just yet (once I go over it though, I WILL want some feedback on this big bad boy!).

It feels so good to have this finished. I do hope I make myself edit it some before moving on (and I need to re-read it from start to finish). I’m really excited to get some feedback on this one. I’ve worked on it for months now…such a labor of love! I had a vision for the basic storyline right away though.

Honestly, I think the writing gets much better, faster paced, and more tightly woven the last half. My editing will probably involve streamlining the first half. I really want to write the sequel to this at some point as well.

Here it is (don’t shoot me, I need to change the title I think!)

Between the Stars Lies an Infinite Blackness

November 9th, 2004 at 11:35 pm
3 Responses to “IT IS DONE!!!!!!!!”
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    Joel Says:

    Back from vacation. I’ll be reading your posts shortly.

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    Great! Can’t wait for the feedback. How was the vacation?

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    Joel Says:

    Great job on finishing the novella. Sorry about the belated congrats :(
    Vacation was wonderful. Four days down in San Diego, one of our favorite places on the planet. Purchased books, attending a cool booksigning, and saw a great play. And time to read: WONDERFUL. I finished two books which, as you know, is difficult these days.